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After I last posted I got in the shower and Ash jumped into my head and wouldn't shut up. I was forced to write it down and now I'm posting it for you guys to critique. I seriously want feedback here. If it's actually half decent and you think I should attempt more tellme. Or if you think I should never ever write again tell me that. It's just two snippets of internal dialogue that don't really connect yet but like I said it just kinda came to me.
Like I said basically this is just Ash thinking about Dean. And no the song is nowhere in there. Um ya, I guess it was just inspirational but didn't really go into the fic at all. I'm aware that my punctuation sucks. Also apparently Ash likes to use air quotes a lot in his mind. *shrug*
Snippet 1:
Of course Dean had moved in on Jo right away. Every guy who came in this place did. Hell, he'd hit on her more times than he could count. She'd told him she just wanted to be "friends". Ever since then whenever he hit on her she'd just laugh like it was a big joke. But shit, he'd still bang that bitch if she said yes. Her momma too. Course he never had the balls to hit on Ellen. If he did he literally wouldn't have balls anymore. He'd even do Dean's beanpole brother if he offered. He just liked sex, plain and simple. Some people would say that makes him "promiscuous". He just thinks of it as being a guy. And being a guy who enjoyed both male and female company, well that just gave him more options than most people.
Snippet 2:
Jo treated him like her damn girlfriend sometimes. Course he didn't complain cause he was still trying to get into her pants. Women liked it when men "listened". He did take an interest though when she started bitching about how Dean had rejected her. She told him she'd played "I Can't Fight This Feeling Anymore" for him and everything. He thought it was no wonder Dean had taken off after that. He didn't tell her that though, nor did he mention how pleased he was about this turn of events. Although he'd had half a mind to convince Jo that Dean was interested in a threesome with the both of them. Then he could turn around and tell Dean it was Jo's idea. He wasn't sure about Dean's sexual preferences but for some guys as long as a girl was in there somewhere that made everything alright.
Like I said basically this is just Ash thinking about Dean. And no the song is nowhere in there. Um ya, I guess it was just inspirational but didn't really go into the fic at all. I'm aware that my punctuation sucks. Also apparently Ash likes to use air quotes a lot in his mind. *shrug*
Snippet 1:
Of course Dean had moved in on Jo right away. Every guy who came in this place did. Hell, he'd hit on her more times than he could count. She'd told him she just wanted to be "friends". Ever since then whenever he hit on her she'd just laugh like it was a big joke. But shit, he'd still bang that bitch if she said yes. Her momma too. Course he never had the balls to hit on Ellen. If he did he literally wouldn't have balls anymore. He'd even do Dean's beanpole brother if he offered. He just liked sex, plain and simple. Some people would say that makes him "promiscuous". He just thinks of it as being a guy. And being a guy who enjoyed both male and female company, well that just gave him more options than most people.
Snippet 2:
Jo treated him like her damn girlfriend sometimes. Course he didn't complain cause he was still trying to get into her pants. Women liked it when men "listened". He did take an interest though when she started bitching about how Dean had rejected her. She told him she'd played "I Can't Fight This Feeling Anymore" for him and everything. He thought it was no wonder Dean had taken off after that. He didn't tell her that though, nor did he mention how pleased he was about this turn of events. Although he'd had half a mind to convince Jo that Dean was interested in a threesome with the both of them. Then he could turn around and tell Dean it was Jo's idea. He wasn't sure about Dean's sexual preferences but for some guys as long as a girl was in there somewhere that made everything alright.
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